Reading 09
Week 21 Doing it yet again This week our task is to go and look at blogs from two classmates and provide feedback on how they're doing with their chapters. This will be an in-depth review. Over the last couple of weeks ive been looking at pieces of work from Tudor and David. We all put our work on this google doc so that we can review work. While I was looking at Tudors work I could tell that he could format his work properly, everything was on tract and straight to the point, all of the introduction leading up to the info was short and concise while still engageing the readers to read what he has to say. Feedback for Tudor Something that I think tudor could improve on is his conclusion, I think his approach to upon learning better ways to do a conculsion, I believe he can make the conclusion more appealing to the readers, one way it could be improved is talking about the info gathered in a way that he isnt directly saying "in conclusion", saying it in more of a natural w...